Showing posts with label Fantasy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Fantasy. Show all posts

03 November, 2011

Unbound Ch. 1

Ranmus thought he heard someone in the hall but ignored it; they were probably just another servant on their way to clean or whatever else the earl was having them do. The Earl of Tournay kept a staff of about twenty servants, three of which were prisoners of war he had purchased from the Ayleran slavers, Ranmus among them. Unlike the other prisoners-turned-slaves, Ranmus had not been put to work until that morning. His wounds had kept him bedridden for weeks while doctors tended to him. Finally healed, he was glad to be on his feet, although he wished he could have been free.
The Earl of Tournay had given him no cause for distrust yet. He had, after all, seen that Ranmus’ injuries were mended. If left to the slavers and lesser masters, Ranmus might have died from his wounds. The shame of his scars made him stoop, his once powerful body diminished to a slave’s vessel. Whatever he was asked, he thought he would do it.
The other slave was younger than him, and not a soldier. He’d been taken with his father, who had seen to Ranmus on occasion. The ex-soldier made a note to seek the man out and thank him for his help. The familiar tones of the Menasian accent would be a comfort to him in this land he’d spent five years fighting to protect his home from. The doctor’s boy couldn’t be settling in well, Ranmus thought, so he would make himself available to him.
Ranmus looked up from the statue he was dusting off, his hair falling in front of his left eye. The earl’s son was standing in the doorway, watching him with a curious stare. Grating against the restraints of slavery, Ranmus bent himself slowly in a bow. “My lord,” he said, pausing in his cleaning.
“You’re the soldier,” the earl’s son said, pushing away from the doorframe and coming into the study. He leaned against the desk, and when Ranmus didn’t reply, he looked cross. “Well?”
Ranmus could think of no reason why the earl’s son would go out of his way to talk to him. He was, after all, a slave and a disgraced soldier from Menasse. “Yes, sir. I was a soldier.”
“Yes, that’s what I said. I haven’t seen you yet. I just figured who you were by looking at you.” The young noble adjusted his rolled up sleeves; he’d clearly come from fencing instruction. There was a flush in his cheeks and a tousled look to his light hair that told he’d not neglected his practice.
Ranmus looked down at the floor, folding his cleaning rag. He didn’t know what the boy wanted and was nervous lest the butler or the earl himself found him standing idly by. “Sir.”
“My name is Alwyn. You can call me by my name if you tell me yours.” The boy grinned when Ranmus didn’t answer. “Tell me your name.”
The first chance he got, Ranmus would plan his escape. It was decided. “Ranmus.”
Alwyn grimaced at the sound. “Menasian, clearly. Well, I must say, it was nice to make your acquaintance. I’ll let you get to it, then.”
Ranmus breathed a silent sigh when the boy left. He would do his best to avoid Alwyn until such a time as he could escape and return home to Menasse.

29 July, 2011

The Fruits of My Efforts

So I have a title! I think it's fitting, seeing as Imeda, the dark elf seductress, is corrupting Anradel, the exiled light elf prince. See? Progress! The image I think most closely fits the character of Tahlir ("prince") Anradel is this piece from Deviant Art. I mean, aside from how large those ears are, I think this is going to be exactly what Imeda tries to turn him into. I've spent a lot of time today rifling through pictures of elves on there, and I happened across this piece that I immediately knew had to be another character. He's going to be Caellas, Anradel's best friend in the world. Already there's a complication: Anradel gets banished and has to leave his friend. How will they reunite? Does Caellas turn on Anradel, or does he forgive him and miss him?

My story takes places in Amual, the land where the different races of elves live with humans and the occasional Feywild. I've sketched out three distinct elf races: light, heartland, and dark. The light elves are the ruling class, the heartland elves are their subjects along with the humans, and the dark elves are a completely isolated group who despite their unhappiness are still subjects of the light elves. Their language has probably undergone a lot of changes from the proto-elven language spoken when the three races were one.

I'm working on outlining as much of a plot as I can. Tomorrow I'm going to a Plot and Pacing Workshop put on by my NaNo Region group. I hope to learn a lot about plotting and put it to use on this story! Perfect timing.

28 July, 2011

Session 2 Planning

After homework and dinner, I sat down with notebook and pen and played Nightwish songs to stir up ideas for my next novel. The second session of Camp NaNoWriMo starts Monday, so I really wanted to think of something to write about. Winging it sounded like the way to go since I couldn't think of anything new to write about but as soon as "Amaranth" started playing, the brainstorm began. I listened through several more songs, the shuffle taking me through different albums. The variety of lyrics in the songs gave me exactly what I needed to start planning my new story.

I have the basic beginnings of the plot: elf prince exiled for the slaying of his sister. Evil seductress luring him in to manipulate him and make him her weapon. Ideas of gods and prophecies. The prince won't be under her control forever; he will realize that his ways have become tainted by evil and try to make things right. This makes him a target, and he becomes one of the hunted.

All sounds great, but I don't even know his name! I've got Behind the Name open and ready for action. Next on the list is naming my villainess and giving her a motive. Whatever she's doing, she needs the prince to be her tool so that she won't face retribution from the gods. Yeah. It's that bad.

After those things are decided upon, I need to figure out where this plot is heading. How is the woman defeated? Does the prince's society ever forgive him for his unthinkable crime? What's my title going to be? I've still got a lot of thinking to do over the next few days before Camp starts and the words come pouring out.

04 July, 2011

Today's Discovery

As I was writing today, I learned that Haeddry has never ridden a horse. He doesn't remotely know how to ride. If it weren't such an annoying skill to lack, Nyd would be glad for the reason to less of HD. However, Nyd is going to have to lead Haeddry's horse around by the reins until HD learns how to properly ride.


“How do I turn him around?” Haeddry called over his shoulder.
“Just keep pulling on the reins to the right and he’ll eventually turn around.” Nyd rolled his eyes when Haeddry, after finally getting the stallion to turn, kept turning so that they went in a wide circle.


Update on my main characters: They are getting along terribly. They keep saying and doing things to each other for the sole purpose of getting on the other's nerves. Hopefully by August they'll be good friends. I think that will be my new goal. Make Haeddry and Nyd friends.

Oblivion

Elder Scrolls: Oblivion is factoring into my story so much already! I couldn't be happier. If only the story had started with Haeddry waking up in a prison and being sent on a mission by the soon-to-be-assassinated emperor of Cyrodiil. Oh well. (Now I really want to write my first ever fanfic based on Oblivion. Odd.)

How is my story linked to Oblivion then? Well, I've got rats...and lettuce! I also have a painted horse that does not move, just like at the Waterfront gate in the Imperial City. Also skeletons. Not to mention my magic system is based in part on the Oblivion magic schools (I used the names illusion, mysticism, destruction).

This game is my favourite always and forever. I am so looking forward to the sequel, Skyrim! My friends and I are going to have a marathon-style launch party when it comes out November 11th.

03 July, 2011

Meet the Cast: Cheese

And now for a very special character who is close to my heart: the rat named Cheese.

When Haeddry reaches a town called Eston, he runs into a boy named Yelfie. The boy, misisng teeth and grimy from acting like a hooligan all day, invited H.D. to the inn that his brother and uncle work at. His uncle in fact runs the inn, aptly named The Burly Fish.

Yelfie is also the proud owner of Cheese. He found the narcoleptic rat by the Troyus River and they are constant companions. Cheese enjoys sleeping and eating cheese. As Yelfie will assure you, Cheese is not a cannibal. He is in fact a rat.

Haeddry gets into a bind when he tries to entertain Yelfie in return for his help getting him lodgings for the night. Being an illusion mage in training, Haeddry knows the spell that will change the color of Cheese's fur. It's very similar to the spell that Haeddry uses to disguise his hair color. When he thinks no one is looking, H.D. changes Cheese's fur different colors much to the delight of Yelfie. Nyd, however, witnessed the rat's changing colors and confronts Haeddry about it afterwards, forcing the young mage to admit that he is in fact a mage.

Meet the Cast: Nydedrilar

My antihero of sorts is a swordsman named Nydedrilar, commonly known as Nyd. As he explains to Haeddry, "I fought against Rylia five years ago and was responsible for a platoon of twenty men. I’m part of the reason Gilvorna’s prince is still alive today. Since that war, I’ve been serving as a bodyguard for traveling merchants and accompanying nobles on the road." He is from Anetheia, Arnsved's oldest and fiercest enemy. There hasn't been any conflict or really any communication between the two nations in centuries. Nyd doesn't hold anything against Haeddry for being from Arnsved although H.D. panicked a little upon learning where Nyd was from.


Nyd's past is pretty mysterious, even to me, and I created him! His prized possession is his sword. He knew some enchantment adepts at one point in his career. He taught them how to use swords and things like that and in return they pimped his sword out. The blade doesn't break, rust or go dull and there are runes that when activated with give it the power of fire. Pretty excited stuff. I wouldn't want to get in a swordfight with him!


Note: His name is simply pronounced "Nid."

Also, I couldn't help myself. I love Yu-Gi-Oh!

Meet the Cast: Haeddry Dakin

I am doing well as far as my wordcount goes so I can take some time out and introduce my characters. The protagonist's name is Haeddry Dakin and I've written some things about him already. He is in fact nineteen years old and has been slowly learning how to perform spells in the illusion school of magic. His teacher was an illusion adept named Makwyr who has been murdered mysteriously.

Haeddry is on the road in search of a new master. He envies destruction mages and wishes he could become an adept in that school. Unfortunately, he only has the capacity for illusion magic and therefore cannot learn destruction.

He is wiry, fit, and dresses plainly. Since he does so much traveling, his clothes are often dirty and his boots are more dirt than leather. He was born with brown hair but when his powers manifested themselves, his hair turned white. In order to hide his nature and to disguise the white hair that he so abhors, he has used a semi-permanent disguise spell on his hair to return it to the shade that he grew up with. His eyes are also brown.

Being a mage, he hates the rain as well as snow. He cannot bear to be on or near large bodies of water and he has a severe dislike of fish. He enjoys playing harmless tricks on people and spending time by a roaring fireplace.

Edit: As a note, the name is pronounced "Hay-dree Dah-kin." I know the first name is spelt a little fancy. I may abbreviate his name as H.D. in the future.

Illusion of Destruction

The story I am writing for Camp NaNoWriMo is titled Illusion of Destruction. It is about a mage apprentice named Haeddry Dakin. In my fantasy world that is yet unnamed, mages come into their powers in adolescence. Note: only males can wield magic but they cannot pass the trait on; females carry the trait––yay science. I think I made Haeddry (sometimes H.D.) about nineteen years old. He hasn't completed his training but that's not his fault. His teacher was murdered.

The thing is, finding mages willing to take on apprentices is difficult when you're in the school of illusion. These mages are extremely reclusive due to their rarity and the danger such powers poses. Being able to create disguises and things of that sort, illusion mages make good spies. No one wants someone to spy against them, so people like to weed them out.

Not only does Haeddry have to find a new teacher, he has to figure out why his first one was murdered. Could he also be a target? Most definitely.

The synopsis and a small excerpt from the story can be found here.